Hopeless Love

Hopeless Love

She was about to faint

Due to the extreme pain from her bruises.

High rise skyscraper-like dream,

And she decided to take a leap?

*

She was hushed

Transformed into a melancholic beauty

As her faith was broken

By a man who lived in her fantasy

*

It was extremely painful and unacceptable,

But there was no escape,

As the saddest part came to haunt her

When the man stood by her side with an adorable gaze!

***

This poem is a response to a poem Catch Me When I Fall written by Graci.

This is the 98th poem under the poetry journal “Isn’t She A Cape Crusader!” which aims to add 100 poems under 100 days. I missed nineteen days.

Read it and let me know in the comment how it was. You can read another seven (recent) poems on this blog page.

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Thanks!

9 thoughts on “Hopeless Love

      1. It’s unbelievable how you managed to paint a picture of the scenario of what’s happening and what would happen, based only on one post I posted, that’s why I said it is amazing.

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      2. Ohhh… Well thank you again.
        It is the years of practice which is visible now.
        You can see by the fact that I write more than 130 poems this year only.
        Let’s see how it goes in the coming years.
        Thanks again, Graci.

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      3. And it is your 98th now. Congratulations! I have something to say though, how come when I try and click on your site the other posts don’t appear? I actually had to look on my wp feeds to read the recent one you posted.

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      4. Yes that might be an idea. As I use wp app most of the time, I might have to do that when I use my laptop. Again, congratulations.

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      5. I also use the app. I can see all your poems by clicking on Simply G.

        There are two blogs I maintain
        Shivesh’s Poetry Jukebox (Poems)
        Shivesh Writes & Hums (Blogs)
        You can click and check, it will show all.

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