Hopeless Love
She was about to faint
Due to the extreme pain from her bruises.
High rise skyscraper-like dream,
And she decided to take a leap?
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She was hushed
Transformed into a melancholic beauty
As her faith was broken
By a man who lived in her fantasy
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It was extremely painful and unacceptable,
But there was no escape,
As the saddest part came to haunt her
When the man stood by her side with an adorable gaze!
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This poem is a response to a poem Catch Me When I Fall written by Graci.
This is the 98th poem under the poetry journal “Isn’t She A Cape Crusader!” which aims to add 100 poems under 100 days. I missed nineteen days.
Read it and let me know in the comment how it was. You can read another seven (recent) poems on this blog page.
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Thanks!
Wow. This is amazing Shivesh.
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Thanks.
But from Amazing, you can give your review on the thoughts shown in the poem.
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It’s unbelievable how you managed to paint a picture of the scenario of what’s happening and what would happen, based only on one post I posted, that’s why I said it is amazing.
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Ohhh… Well thank you again.
It is the years of practice which is visible now.
You can see by the fact that I write more than 130 poems this year only.
Let’s see how it goes in the coming years.
Thanks again, Graci.
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And it is your 98th now. Congratulations! I have something to say though, how come when I try and click on your site the other posts don’t appear? I actually had to look on my wp feeds to read the recent one you posted.
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This 98 started from June 21 I believe.
Before that day, I already finished 30+ poems.
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About the question, I am not sure about that.
You can directly check to shiveshranjan.com
It lists all my blogs, poems and videos.
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Yes that might be an idea. As I use wp app most of the time, I might have to do that when I use my laptop. Again, congratulations.
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I also use the app. I can see all your poems by clicking on Simply G.
There are two blogs I maintain
Shivesh’s Poetry Jukebox (Poems)
Shivesh Writes & Hums (Blogs)
You can click and check, it will show all.
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